Marked as DNF at 32%.
Just too many things went wrong for me with this one. Such a shame, as I was so damn excited to read this book and started it right now because I felt like I needed a sure thing, that I could almost guarantee I’d love.
However, the all too frequent and cringe-worthy grammatical errors, the cheesy dialogue, the unbelievable (not in a good way) storyline, the ridiculous first encounter, the whole sentences randomly in italics, the fact that both the hero and the heroine pissed me off, the creepy innuendos and the fact that it felt like the entire romance industry had thrown up on these pages, cramming every romance cliché in existence into the story, just made it impossible for me to connect with this book in any way.
The fact I only got through 30% of this book, in two days, speaks volumes. I just found it a struggle and kept putting it down. I was reading on the train and I mindlessly read two whole pages before I realised I hadn’t taken in a word that I’d read and was listening to the conversation between a mother and daughter in the seat next to me, instead.
The heroine really irritated me. I don’t know who I disliked more, him or her. First she was Miss Prim and Proper, then seconds later they were making out, then she was pulling away, then he was virtually sexually harassing her, then she was angry, then he was stalking her, then he stalked her some more at work and then because of one little thing she was all googly eyed over him… WTF?! *head spin*
The ghastly innuendos made me gag…
“Hell hasn’t frozen over yet. I’ll let you know when it does.”
He takes a step closer to me, his voice just above a whisper, “It seems you know all about being cold, Rylee. Why stay frigid when you know I can heat you up?”
And I’m the first to admit to loving a confident, alpha male… but there is a line and for me, Colton leapt over the confident line into unattractive arrogance.
“Just know, Rylee, the best sex you will ever have… will be with me.”
“I told you you wouldn’t be able to resist me.”
And then there were things that just didn’t make any sense and felt poorly planned and thought out. For example, Colton is a celebrity racing driver. But Rylee didn’t know who he was at first. She didn’t recognise him even after she’d snogged his face off at her work function. Yet then the author writes things like this…
“And how would you know what I always have on my arm?”
How do I know that? Do I admit to him I occasionally glance through Haddie’s subscription of People and roll my eyes at the ridiculous commentary? Do I confess that peruse Perezhilton.com as a distraction when I’m in the office sometimes.
So she reads enough gossip rags to know about the women Colton has on his arm, but she doesn’t know what he looks like?? It’s a small error but it’s just one example of how things didn’t fit into place.
I felt like I was reading a totally different book to the Driven everybody recommended to me and raved about. I really wanted to fall in love with Colton Donavon. But sadly, I just didn’t.
I hate it so much when that happens. 😥
Like this review and want to keep up to date with more book news…?
Follow me at the links below…